书面表达
Good Writers:
1. 2. 3. 4.
TIPS:
●多动笔
●多做审题审图训练,
●背诵范文
●积累一定量的短语、习惯表达法和精彩句式
高考情景作文(集体活动类)
一、审题
1.确定时态。通常以过去时为主,过去进行时为辅。感言部分用现在时态。
2.把握基本信息:时间、地点、人物、事件、目的/原因
3.确定每图的主要内容:先用动词标注出来,以保证内容完整,行文流畅。
“集体活动”要注意:
分为两个阶段:准备阶段+活动阶段
人物:具有代表性,不能自行命名
符号:如xxx社区,xxx可以表达a neighboring community, 不能直接写xxx;人数:不要具体写出人数,许多人参加即行
时钟:钟表上的时间是具体的,描述也应该具体;表达可以多样化 注意:图中文字-图中人物--图中图-图角标示
二、 文章结构:
Para1:主题句(一句话点题:时间、地点、人物、内容)
Today my classmates and I went to …to do…/ pay a visit to…
Para2;活动过程
·Early in the morning …/ At 8 o’clock in the morning ….
·Arriving there, we found ….
·Having done…(分词作时间状语)
·Late in the afternoon we…/ At 4:00pm, we…
注意按图示顺序描述,注意分层处理图片,注意小段落结构
Para3: 结论(感言) 议论,包括结题,归纳、总结或思想提升
so proud of our great work and we have decided that we will carry out the activity every year. Though the cleaning was a tough task, our hearts were filled with joy and we will remember this activity for ever. This job will provide me the chance to take part in social activities, which enables me to enrich my after-school life. We are fully convinced that only in this way, can we contribute to build up a more harmonious relationship between human beings and nature. This activity definitely enriches my after-school life and broadens my horizon as well.